Pregunta 1
Writing Task 2. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:
Some people think that the best way to reduce traffic congestion in cities is to make public transport free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
250–350 palabras · 40 min.
Ver solución modelo y criterios
Respuesta modelo
Traffic congestion is a serious problem in many cities, wasting time and polluting the air. It has been suggested that making buses and trains free would be the most effective solution. While I agree that free public transport could help, I do not believe it is the best way to reduce congestion on its own.
There is no doubt that cost influences how people travel. If public transport were free, some drivers, particularly those on low incomes, would probably leave their cars at home, and fewer vehicles on the road would mean shorter journeys for everyone. Free fares would also speed up boarding, since passengers would no longer need to buy tickets.
However, price is often not the main reason why people drive. Many commuters choose their cars because buses are slow, crowded or unreliable, or because there is no convenient route between their home and their workplace. If the service itself does not improve, removing fares will change very little. In fact, a sudden increase in passengers could make overcrowding worse, and the loss of ticket revenue might leave the city with less money to invest in new vehicles and routes.
In my opinion, a more effective strategy would combine several measures. Cities should invest in frequent, reliable services and dedicated bus lanes, so that public transport is genuinely faster than driving. At the same time, charges for driving into the city centre or for parking would discourage unnecessary car journeys, and the money raised could help to fund better public transport.
In conclusion, although free public transport might attract some drivers, it is unlikely to solve congestion unless it is part of a wider plan that makes public transport more attractive and driving less so.
Criterios de corrección
- Task Response: answers every part of the question; presents a clear position throughout; develops main ideas with relevant explanations and examples
- Coherence and Cohesion: logical progression; one central idea per paragraph; cohesive devices used naturally, not mechanically; clear introduction and conclusion
- Lexical Resource: wide, precise vocabulary with some less common items and collocations; few errors in word choice, spelling and word formation
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: wide range of structures (conditionals, passives, relative and concessive clauses); the majority of sentences error-free; accurate punctuation
- Length and time: at least 250 words in about 40 minutes (answers under 250 words lose marks under Task Response)
Explicación
'To what extent do you agree or disagree?' needs a clear position from the first paragraph (here: partly agree). Note the key word 'best': the essay argues that free transport helps but is not the BEST way, and proposes a better alternative. Concede the opposite side, then explain why it is not sufficient, with cause-and-effect reasoning.