Pregunta 1
| Museum | 1995 | 2005 | 2015 |
|---|---|---|---|
| Science Museum | 420 | 510 | 680 |
| Art Gallery | 350 | 340 | 310 |
| History Museum | 280 | 390 | 400 |
| Transport Museum | 150 | 120 | 260 |
Writing Task 1. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the number of visitors to four museums in one city in 1995, 2005 and 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
150–220 palabras · 20 min.
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Respuesta modelo
The table shows how many people visited four museums in one city in 1995, 2005 and 2015.
Overall, total visitor numbers rose over the period, and the Science Museum was the most popular attraction in all three years. The Art Gallery was the only museum whose attendance fell over the twenty years as a whole.
The Science Museum saw the largest growth, with visitors increasing from 420,000 in 1995 to 510,000 in 2005 and then to 680,000 in 2015. The History Museum also became more popular, rising from 280,000 to 390,000 in the first decade, although it gained only a further 10,000 visitors in the second.
The other two museums followed different patterns. The Art Gallery attracted 350,000 visitors in 1995, but this figure declined slightly to 340,000 and then to 310,000. The Transport Museum, the least visited of the four in every year, dipped from 150,000 to 120,000 in 2005 before more than doubling to 260,000 in 2015.
As a result, the combined number of visitors to the four museums grew from 1.2 million to 1.65 million.
Criterios de corrección
- Task Achievement: covers the requirements; gives a clear overview of the main trends or differences; highlights and illustrates key features with accurate figures; reports only what the data show (no opinions or causes)
- Coherence and Cohesion: organises information logically (introduction, overview, 2 body paragraphs); uses a range of linking devices accurately; clear paragraphing
- Lexical Resource: varied, precise vocabulary for describing and comparing data (rose, declined slightly, more than doubled, the proportion of...); accurate spelling and word formation
- Grammatical Range and Accuracy: mix of simple and complex sentences (comparatives, relative clauses, while/whereas); most sentences error-free
- Length and time: at least 150 words in about 20 minutes; do not copy the wording of the task
Explicación
With data over time, describe trends (rose, dipped, more than doubled) rather than isolated numbers, and remember the figures are in thousands (420 = 420,000). A good overview mentions the overall increase, the leader (Science Museum) and the exception (Art Gallery). Grouping rising museums in one paragraph and the others in another keeps the report coherent.